Philip Smith, Walking Through Walls (Atria, 2009) Reading Walking Through Walls makes you long for the old days, back when editors actually edited and suggested changes to their authors that strengthened books, kept them organized and centered around a theme. Walking Through Walls could certainly have benefited from good editing. There's a fine story lost in it.
Smith shows us that it isn't easy to live a normal high school life with a father like this who, after his psychic work breaks up his marriage, moves into a guest house on the property and carries on from 50 or so feet away. When Smith concentrates on this story, he does fine and the book is fascinating, but the author sometimes seems confused as to whose story he's telling. He leaves his dad behind for whole sections while he tells us about growing up in Miami during the hippie years, his minor league run-ins with the law, his pot use, sexual experimentation and his flirtation with Scientology. At time I found myself wondering exactly who was the subject of the memoir. I recognize that Smith wants us to know how living with his father shaped his life, but he loses his balance and the organization of the book suffers. Too often, he simply seems to be fascinated with the events of his own life just because they happened to him and the fact is, they aren't that unusual or that interesting. When he concentrates on his father's story, the book takes on an energy that is absent when he drifts away from his main topic. A good editing could have kept him on track and given us as readers a better book. ![]() |
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